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I'm caged in,
barred in my mind.
There is no key, no savior,
so help me please!

I'm only human,
prone to make mistakes.
I didn't need this,
I didn't deserve this,
what was “right” is wrong!



Regrets, Regrets, Regrets,
they keep me in.
No matter how much I kick, scream,
nothing is here to save me.



Some think it is a animal,
a beast within me.
Some think it is the past,
spinning and circling in repeat.

For me, it may be both.
The past is the past,
laughs the animal in me.
It kicks in me,
spilling crimson and regret.
I bleed in cruel and bitter rule.



Regrets, Regrets, Regrets,
evil identities on repeat.
Always here, Always there,
a true crown of thorns...

Sticking on my head,
pounding with my heart,
All I ever wanted was to be free..

Regrets, Regrets, Regrets,
we are here to fight you.
Don't take her,
she is stronger than you.
Don't take him,
he is too.

Regrets, Regrets, Regrets,
come and fight like a man!
Prove to me you are what you say you are!
Don't run and hide, come with your head held high!

And be ready to die!
So.. this is more than just a poem.

This is for two people on DA who still struggle with the past.. they are my friends and i wanna help, so i guess this is what have to give you...

killerlord123 and LMW-Creations 

Hug Huggle! (two hugs for each person)

if i completely did it wrong.. let me know... i can do another

....

I think that is all there is to be said, i think.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
Wow... Thanks a lot for writing this, it's amazing. You're a great friend, you know? :hug:
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome and i try to be. if you need anything, let me know
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Sure thing, pal :)
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
Oh my... :hug: Thank you for taking that time to write, you're so wonderful. This does feel like it fits well, the only difference is the wording of the thoughts. But, thank you. Just amazing - you and the poem.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
umm.. thank you. :)

i'm glad you find the poem and me wonderful... i seriously hope you don't mind me mention you.
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
No, not at all. I'm just happy to read something so similar to my thoughts, it's one of those mini revelation moments of knowing someone understand enough. (Thus my happier reaction despite a different mood of emotion. ^^; And it's a nice thought too to write something.)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
okay, making sure.  I bet it is a relief and it may help you (who knows)
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TheArtist3711 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is great!:3
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
thank you!
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TheArtist3711 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np!
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