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April 13, 2014


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Please stop,
with this madness!
I just want to be,
left in peace!
Can you respect that?

Is it too much to ask,
or is it in too vain of me?
Answer me, I say,
I need the truth today!

Lower that weapon,
of my destruction,
and tell me now!

But you can't,
you are too curious.
I must not let you in,
it would be my greatest sin.

Please don't come closer.
Please don't move forward.
I don't want to build a wall,
from a newcomer like you.

You lower the weapons,
every inch of red put out, gone.
I open my eyes to the spawn,
who would of made me a fool, a pawn,
in your devilish hands and breath.
In your awaking yawn.

I laugh and smile,
I am no longer in the deadly Nile.
You see the side,
I don't bother to hide.
I am an actor ,
and I hold it with pride.

You walk away, defeated,
pained from being beaten ed.
You thought it would be easy,
to claim the victory that was never yours.
It is your fault you are so sore,
it never knocked at your door.

You didn't deserve it anyway.

For you are too curious,
too nosy to ever be considered,
a friend of mine.

So go away,
I don't have time for you.
I could try to be friends,
and lend a helping hand,
but time is more worthy,
on the understanding few.

I don't care what you think of me,
you are basing it on what you see.
You may think I am quiet, shy,
or just plain weird.
I know what you see,
on the surface called me.

And hey, I would rather be view as that.
I would rather be seen as fully weird,
than as fully retarded.

Because at least,
I can stil live in the world,
I wanted to be in.
The world I always wanted.
The world,
of being semi normal.

Deadly Radar (Part 2/2)by AnnaBellLee17

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Traditional Fixed Forms©2014-2015 AnnaBellLee17
this is the next part.. enjoy.…  <---- the first part
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A beautiful continuation of part 1. Well done :)
AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Writer
thank you.  i was striving to be very blunt and i think I achieved it. Anime Emoji (Oh yay dance) [V2]  yay!

and thanks for  faving it.
Yeah, you did just that.
And you're welcome :)
AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Writer
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